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I wrote this one a while back, when i was struggling with my novel!
Name of fame
Play the game, play the game,
Skills to gain, skills to train,
Ignore the pain, ignore the rain,
Remember the name, remember the fame.
Try and fulfill you destiny,
No gain in mediocrity?
Stay clear of insanity,
But believe in fantasy,
Write words subtlety,
And put my trust in me,
Play the game, play the game,
Take all the shame, take all the blame,
Oh what became, of that burning flame?
Driven insane, or was it Slain?
It is you within those scared pages,
Remember that when they take ages,
Unlock the words from their cages,
They will develop over many stages,
The proofreaders earn their wages,
Better know as the sages.
Play the game, play the game,
Lots to gain, lots to train,
Laugh at the pain, laugh at the rain,
Famous name, name of fame.
Copyright of Kevin, Dean, Martin 2004
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My most famous one of all...
My life as a rose.
I wake with the morning bud,
Then flower like a rose,
My petals reach up to heaven,
Leaving all my sins and woes-
Buried deep beneath the soil,
In the darkness nothing shows,
I sway in nature’s gentle breeze,
Amid the evening bloom,
Colours purged in a kaleidoscope,
Flaunting amongst the gloom,
But soon evils mysterious shadow,
Ominously begins to loom,
I cower with enigmatic dread,
My petals bow in respect,
Why has the bright light fled?
Leaving me alone to watch,
My petals that once were red,
Wither, fade, hide and wait.
Copyright of Kevin, Dean, Martin 2004
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And finally one of my freeverse poems...
The Web?
I have become tangled in a web,
Transgressing threads of redemption
And undulating threads of infatuation,
Merged and Entwined in threads of deploration,
I’m held tightly by threads of possession,
Yet gripped lightly by those of anticipation!
And only a single thread of this web,
Makes my heart skip a beat,
Makes my stomach flutter,
Makes my knees weak,
Makes my life complete,
But what thread is it?
It is the thread of love,
The thread that all others weave into,
It’s the strongest thread,
The weakest thread,
The thread that eludes us all,
Yet always finds us.
I’m not caught in a web,
But suspended from it by the thread of love,
Which can bear the greatest weight,
Yet fail without warning,
Only I can build this thread,
And only I can break it,
It renders me isolated,
Spinning me mercilessly,
Swigging me with grace,
Pulling me up,
Letting me drop,
But always linking me to the web,
If I forget this link,
The web will weaken,
The thread will weaken,
Finally snapping,
Sending me falling into the abyss,
Heading gracelessly towards the next web,
Copyright of Kevin, Dean, Martin 2004
(written 4th August 2004, 4.30pm)
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great poems, my friend!!!!and you know what's my fav.... :tongue2:
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no, darling you were too busy and haven't read my poetry section there!!!!
some poetry of mine
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That’s why i posted it, just for you Julz 
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no, darling you were too busy and haven't read my poetry section there!!!!
some poetry of mine
What, that's on my writing forum? Sorry gurl i must have missed that...let me go take a looksy...
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i know, but you haven't seen my old section at YOUR board!!!! 
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you've neglected your fav brazilian's section... 
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I did this one 4 years ago...when I was starting to write, is simple but is a little dark tale...
Predator and Prey
Emerald gaze
Walking through the place
Like a wild predator hunting for his prey.
He searched and search looking for one of his likes.
He found her and was ready to bite.
She stared at him like in a trance
He grinned and did not waste time.
She smiled dreamily.
He looked at her up and down briefly
She saw his features
He was like no other creature.
They danced and danced until there was no chance...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
He took her to her house.
Sensual emotion they shared
Sexual emotion they started.
He smelled her blood.
He was making her all hot...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
She was in a complete illusion,
He grinned and smiled and thought about making a conclusion.
He bites and bites until there was nothing left.
She gasped and gasped until was feeling the death.
The last thing she saw was his handsome face
He left her house without leaving a trace...
“...” she said in her last breath
she closed her eyes and was received by Death....
Sandra Oquendo©
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