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BogeyDog
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Thanks all. 
I tried to describe the morning when Hector was killed by Achilleus. And of course I do not cry all night, but I have some trouble with english rhymes.
I promise I will develop my english...
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Feb/15/2006, 2:47 pm
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christia
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BogeyDog, what a wonderful poem. 
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Feb/15/2006, 7:48 pm
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Thanks christia!
Do Banatics have any march? I mean a song that you sing when you meet somewhere...
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Feb/16/2006, 8:20 am
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Cheric
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Hae evryone, I hope you don't mind me adding a few poemz of my own...
You see im a CRAZY E.B fan and huge romantic
and adding the two together after seeing Troy, well, I had to do something to let it all out...
So I started writing poemz about Hektor and another character me and my wonderful cousins made up, Olympius, a beautiful, breath-taking and illustrious Queen Of Sparta (Yes I know what your thinking, isn't that Helen??? Well its very different and way off from the real legendary history,lol)
They fall in L.O.V.E and of course it is the beggining of a very dramatic, passionate and lustfull relationship.
Anyway at first I began writing poemz that I published for a side project at skool.
Since then i've written a novel (Yes a WHOLE book!!!)
So this is one of the MANY poemz, lol...
ENJOY...
GREAT PRINCE OF MY HEART
You have a special something,
A way with your form and phrase.
These sensations took me higher,
Leading onto many lustfull days.
You have a special way,
You hold me in your arms.
The way you own my body,
I surrender to your charms.
You have a special manner,
In which you love me just for me.
There is no other place,
That I would rather be.
You have a unique way,
Of knowing how I feel.
The moment you look into my eyes,
You know that this is real.
I simply can't imagine,
An instant without you.
So that is why i'm writing this,
To explain to you the truth.
I want to stay forever,
Safe within your sweet embrace.
Never have I felt safer,
In any other place.
So I will tell you Hektor,
You so loving and presise.
Great Prince Of My Heart,
You've saved my very life.
DO YOU LOVE???
I hope so...
! !Much love to all! !
ALL MA L.O.V.E
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Feb/18/2006, 2:27 am
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Bana Hungry
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These are awesome poems....I love the art of creation just as much as I love Eric. Let me share a poem with you that I wrote a couple of years ago, it originally wasnt' about Eric, but in the spirit of the Banatics I changed the words for him and for you all....
Beautiful Mass
(A dedication to the creation of Eric Bana)
Solid lines of velvet prose written upon a summer body.
What do you feel like
underneath the shirt that clings all too jealously against you?
Solid man in God’s eternity.
Beautiful mass of sculpted dust.
I seek your eyes upon my face,
your fingers against my cheek,
your breath to be swallowed by mine should you tread too close.
My gaze follows your swagger
and grabs at your smile.
Cheekbones fragile like those of a fragile David.
Youth caresses your face in all its sweet kisses.
Eyes look up through lashes so long that I dare to lay a dream upon each of them.
One man you are, revealing so many
and I rub against each of you,
washing you in my salt.
Secret body,
a rippling heat of smoothness and waves,
covered in finality.
That kiss blown by God to perfect upon you a haze of mystery,
and wonderful vulnerability.
You, simple man,
a demonstration of ecstasy caged in that solid, beautiful mass.
A body that I may lay hands upon and weep,
for the sheer creation of you.
okay, it may seem much but this was originally written for a poetry class I had taken so keep that in mind.   
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Feb/22/2006, 3:53 am
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Bana Hungry you are talented! Every word was perfection...just like Eric!! 
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Feb/23/2006, 1:19 am
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Bana Hungry
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Thank you so much, everyone on here has incredible talent!
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Feb/23/2006, 4:21 am
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