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LADY FANATIC:
Oh I'm sorry, didn't I tell you? She bows slightly. My name is Lady fanatic of Hogwarts.
The words takes Luinarys' breath away. This is little Fanatic? The heir of Lord Hogwarts? I can't believe it!
She moves closer to Fanatic. My lady, you are Fanatic? She smiles a bit. I've seen you ten years ago for the last time, when your father visited Chassalla. You were ... well, you were very young. But she was brisk and selfish at that time, too. I'm glad to meet you again, my dear. How's your lord father?
LADY FANATIC:
But who is she? I told MY name ...
Fanatic eyes Luinarys. My lady, if you'd be so kind to tell me YOUR name? I can't remind me of a meeting at Chassalla. Gosh, I was nine years old at that time! But I could do what I wanted - riding and fighting. Not that foolish lady stuff!
LADY LUINARYS:
Luinarys blushes a bit. Oh, how impolite of me! Where are my manners?
I'm so sorry, my dear. I am Lady Luinarys Excalibow of Grail Hall, wife of Lord Steward Arthurian ... and this she points at Tina ... is Lady Tina of Skye Manor, Lady wife of knight Tristanir of the Round Table. She's a lovely friend of me. She blinks to Tina.
Well, my lady, you represent House Hogwarts at the royal court instead of your lord father - that's a huge honor, isn't it? I'm sure, you'll enjoy the tournament and the royal feasts. She's young and unmarried. Althought the great houses are cautious towards the family of Hogwarts, some noble members fancy with magic and myths of the north. She'll get some advances of noblemen, I'm sure of that.
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So your father sends his daughter to the court alone? Tina rises her eyebrow Even in Hogwarts you ought to hear of the risk to travel alone. Also for knights it’s dangerous so it’s really nothing for a lass like you….
The young lady wants to cut in on her talk but Tina goes on
And it doesn’t matter if you’re good in handling a sword or not.
LADY FANATIC:
Fanatic blushes and bits on her lips because of anger. Why must I listen to that foolish stuff? How can a lady know about the danger of the wilde, the woods and the roads?
Lady Tina, you know nothing about the woods or the danger of the roads, don't you? Well, I've spent much time riding and fighting, and that's why I'm able to protect myself easily without any help of some fearsome ladies and their advices! She eyes proudly the two older ladies.
LADY LUINARYS:
Luinarys looks appalled at Fanatic. How can she dare to speak to us in that way ? She's a noble lady, not a baseborn wench. Where are her good manners? Why did she become so angry? Well, she's young ...
She braces herself. Lady Fanatic, please! She looks serioulsy at Fanatic. Calm down! Lady Tina didn't intend to offend you! She's rather worried about your safety on your way to the royal court - nothing more.
She must learn many things about behavior and diplomacy, if she'll become Lady of Howgwarts! I fear, her father treats her too gentle ... I wished, my lord father treated me the same way ... But Lord Henryk expected obedience of his eldest daughter ...
She gazes at Tina to know her feelings. Then, she puts her hand on Tina's arm. You're right, dear, we should hurry to meet our lord husbands. Maybe, Lady Fanatic needs some time to rest and dress. She gives Fanatic an encouraging glance, and then she turns towards the Lord's Hall.
LADY FANATIC:
Fanatic says nothing, but she's troubled with anger and shame. I didn't want to come here to play the noble "lady". I'm not capable of talking about boring stuff and of exchanging nice courtesies! Pah!
But at least, Sir Viggo is no nobleman, who hides himself behind the lap of his lady!
She bowes lightly. See you soon, my noble ladies. I'll be so glad to meet you again at the feast, to continue our nice chat. Then, she disappears with a derisive smile on her lips.
LADY LUINARYS:
She continues her walk to the Lord's Hall. Don't worry, Tina. She's still a young, innocent woman. I guess, she's dreaming of being independent ... of being strong and brave like a warrior. Life will teach her soon, how to act better. After her marriage, she'll be calmer than now, I'm sure.
Luinarys feels sorry for Fanatic in a way. She knows her freedom at Avalon and in the North Wall - the South and the noble people frighten her ... poor girl.
They reach the Lord's Gate.
Look right, Tina. There's the bench ... she wishpers to her friend, while blushing. Gosh, I am a stupid woman, am I? To talk in private with another man!
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Tina looks at the scene in front of her. Her friend Luinarys and this snotty girl. She doesn’t know if she should laugh or getting angry. It seems Lady Fanatic has not a spark of respect; Tina shakes her head watching Luinarys blushing because of the rude behaviour of the younger woman.
And Luinarys blushes – she really has to lose her way at the moment. All right she didn’t tell her name but it’s no cause for this tone.
Tina sighs inwardly
Lady Luinarys, wife of Lord Steward Arthurian, she should exude a bit of proud at least. What’s happening to her? What should I do? If she knows how frail she looks at the moment?
Tina forces her to listen to the Ladies talk. Actually she wants to head off to meet Tristanir and to go to the feast.
The earlier we appear the earlier we could leave.
She starts smiling
There would be much better things we could do instead of dancing and eating and listening to boring stuff while smiling interested.
She sighs inwardly and looks with guilty mien to Luinarys. Hardly trying not to think of tender hands and what they could do with her.
It seems it wasn’t too favourably talking about an heir
Another smile on her face as she heard her name
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Lady Tina of Skye Manor, Lady wife of knight Tristanir of the Round Table. She's a lovely friend of me.
Tina nod her head
Nice to meet you. Even if your welcome wasn’t that warm I hope you feel comfortable here
Flowery phrase of courtesy. She still doesn’t know what to think of this girl. She doesn’t know House Hogwarts and she had never heard of it but well she was confused of all these different families at all and glad to be able to remind of her friends names.
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Lady Tina, you know nothing about the woods or the danger of the roads, don't you? Well, I've spent much time riding and fighting, and that's why I'm able to protect myself easily without any help of some fearsome ladies and their advices!
She stares at Lady Fanatic and tries to find out if she understands her words in the right way. What impertinence. She takes a deep breath.
There is no cause to speak with us like that. You don’t know me so you don’t know what I know or not, what I can do or not. I spent my time riding and fighting when you weren’t born yet. Beware of your loose tongue. I just tried to make understandable that it’s dangerous outside. There’s really no reason to be so rude.
Tina notes Luinarys hand and calms down. She feels hot inside and wasn’t sure if she was still in a rage or if her thoughts caused this feeling.
She glances at Fanatic
I think we’ll meet later
nods her head and turns to follow Lady Luinarys.
Tina snuffles
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Don't worry, Tina. She's still a young, innocent woman. I guess, she's dreaming of being independent ... of being strong and brave like a warrior. Life will teach her soon, how to act better. After her marriage, she'll be calmer than now, I'm sure.
How did she dare? Young, fresh-water and callow. Just to name a few characteristics I was allowed to get to know. I don’t even want to think of her thoughts if she’s saying such things. If I’d still unmarried I’d ask her for a contest…to call me a fearsome Lady!!!
Tina starts to murmur! Lady Fanatic hits the mark. Something Tina can’t cope with. To be so restricted doesn’t suit her.
They reach the Lord’s Gate.
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Look right, Tina. There's the bench ...
Tina grabs Luinarys arm
I hope you know that I’d never take something for granted. I don’t want you to think that I think you’re in love with you know who. I just want to be sure. To be sure that I’m right. I’d never want you any harm and it is like it is, rooms whose are offside where people won’t meet so often, where it’s dark and in private will conjure up rumours if anybody see you. That’s all I wanted to tell you. Something is in the air. Everybody is tensed so it would be poison if anybody tells a lie about you. By the way what did he do here? It’s not a place Counts usually stay without a cause. Did he tell you what he wants? He couldn’t know that you will cross this gate, could he? I’m sorry, I might be paranoid but I wouldn’t put it past to him that he tries everything to get what he wants.
Did she get me right? Tina thinks sorrowful.
A slight air drafts a flap and a heavy weight on her shoulder.
My lord and master’s calling for me
Tina says sarky
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Tina and Luinarys enter the „Lord's House“ and circle the holy fire in the middle of the huge hall. A young man stands next to the marmoreal statue of the 'Warrior of Courage', lost in prayer.
Luinarys looks uncertainly at Tina, whose last words are still in her mind.
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I’d never want you any harm and it is like it is, rooms whose are offside where people won’t meet so often, where it’s dark and in private will conjure up rumours if anybody see you. That’s all I wanted to tell you. Something is in the air. Everybody is tensed so it would be poison if anybody tells a lie about you. By the way what did he do here? It’s not a place Counts usually stay without a cause. Did he tell you what he wants? He couldn’t know that you will cross this gate, could he? I’m sorry, I might be paranoid but I wouldn’t put it past to him that he tries everything to get what he wants.
Luinarys sighs inwardly. If I only know! The guilty feelings never stop hunting me – am I more happy now, if I had married Keanu? If I had obeyed my lord father? But I love Arthurian with all my heart! I want to follow him, give him children, support him.
She nods to Tina and whispers: Let us hurry, dear. We are late! Let us talk about this subject later - in private, please!
They have nearly reached the royal court, when Luinarys stumbles and makes a noise. She blushes because of her inadvertence and takes Tina's arm for foothold. But the young knight has noticed the two ladies and skelters to help Luinarys.
My lady! Can I help you? Are you harmed? he asked solicitously and touches gently Luinarys' right foot.
Luinarys is abashed and shakes her head. No, it was just a tiny carelessness of me, don't worry, your excellency. I'm fine, thank you. She tries to give him a courteous smile.
The young man eyes her curiously. He has short, thick dark hair, big green eyes and a distinctive, beautiful face. He wears the garment of the Royal Guard with a purple cloak – obviously a captain. Suddenly, he recognizes her. He steps back and bows deeply.
I'm pleased to meet you, Lady Excalibow. It's a huge honor to help you, the lady wife of my commander. The captain is all smiles. And what a nice fortuity, that we meet here, my lady, because I would love to talk to you about a very private subject, your ladiness. He glances at Tina.
With me, your excellency? Luinarys laughs surprised.
Why does the youngest son of Duke Kingsgrave wants to talk to me? Something is wrong here! She gets a bad feeling.
[=> for reminding: family tree of Duke Kingsgrave --> the Kingsgraves and the Riverwinds are related by Duchess Karla, who was a formal Riverwinds (aunt of Count Keanu)]
Are there problems concerning Arthurian and the Royal Guard? She knits her brows and changes a quick glance with Tina.
Is someting wrong, my lord? she asked uncertainly. How can I help you?
My lady ... Jorah, Lord of Kingsgrave and youngest son of Duke Jeremy, takes again a look at Tina, as if he tries to remember, who she is – ... the concerning subject is of private nature and ... he lowers his voice ... I'd like to talk to you without your handmaiden, please.
Luinarys is shocked. But my Lord, this is ... She looks at Tina. my beloved friend ... Another member of the Royal Guard appears at the Lord's Gate and interrupts Luinarys.
Captain? Lord Kingsgrave? The man runs to Jorah and salutates.
Excellence, there's need of you in the Royal Hall! He bows at Tina and Luinarys and leaves the hall again.
Well, your ladiness, Jorah bows at Luinarys, ... I fear, I must leave you – but please, let me know, when you find time to have a short talk with me. It's seriuos business, my lady. He gives a pitiful smile to Tina and disappears.
Luinarys watches him go and then turns to her friend. Tina, I am so ashamed, dear. I don't know, where he left his manners! Anger can be seen in her eyes.
I cannot imagine, that he doesn't know WHO you are! I mean, Tristanir is a knight of the Round Table – and Jorah is a member of the Royal Guard – both military groups must work together, mustn't they? She takes Tina's hands. Please don't worry, dear! I will talk about this with Arthurian this night!
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Fanatic leaves the two ladies shacking her head.
What the hell??? As if i don't know the danger of roads and woods. What do they want?! She shakes her head again. Angrily she pushes open a heavy door. Fanatic tramples up the stairs to her rooms.
I hate it! I hate it! I hate it! I should have stayed home in Hogwarts. Where I could meet with my friends, go out riding with Uranus and bring some trouble to all the knights.
She could have easily convinced her father to send someone else, but one part of her brain wanted to go to this stupid feast.
And that is what you get for it!!! Only stupid comments from some noble women. And... she tells the portrait of some man. She stopped to have a closer look at the picture. It showed an elder man with an enormous sword.
How strange.
She twists her eyebrows. The dark brown, proud looking eyes and the striking chin were familiar to her, but she can’t remember where she had see it before. But it was clear that this guy was someone with lots of powers. Fanatic looks around, but can't find any sign saying who that is.
I have to keep that in mind! She turns around and runs back to her room.
The door falls shut behind her. She walks to the bathroom to get some fresh water. On the way she notices herself in a mirror.
Well, I don't look that bad, do I? she says with a critical view on herself. She turns from on side to the other to judge her appearance. She looks more like some hand-maiden with her curly red hair being messed up, the dress covered with some leaves, but her brown eyes are full of life. She wasn’t too tall and not to slim and not to thick. In her eyes not perfect, but still acceptable. She smiles.
I’m so stupid! Letting me reprimand by two ladies. Pah! They surly have no idea about how to have fun and how to be happy. I better try to find a way to avoid any conversations like that tonight. Maybe I should just...
A sudden noise outside her room makes her break off her thoughts about the evening. She crosses the room in a hurry and opens the door.
What is going on here? she asks loudly before she actually sees anybody. She turns her head in all directions and finally sees two people standing close together right at the corner.
Excuse me! But, could you please be so kind to lower your voices! she glances at them in anger.
Unexpectedly one of them moves into the small spotlight of one of the torches. I’m more than sorry that we interrupted you in whatever you have done till that point. the man said. And Fanatic has the urgent feeling to take her life immediately.
Can this day get any better?! she growled angrily with a disgusted look at the trouble-maker. It is nobody else than prince Orlandolas. And now a girl detaches herself from the shadow stepping closer to him starting to kiss his ear.
That is so sick! Fanatic can hardly pull herself together. Especially now that the prince throws provoking looks into her direction. Well, do whatever you want but I beg you...do it somewhere else, where nobody can hear you!!! With that she turns around and slams her door shut.
OH MY GODNESS! Can anybody please rescue me out of this madhouse?! Why did I come here? Still complaining about Orlandolas, the feast and the situation in a whole she starts to change her dress again, then she brushes her hair and then finally goes down into the great hall.
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girls where should i begin my part? 
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Was it necessary? Did I said anything wrong They entered the “Lord’s House” before a minute and this young man definitely bothers their talk. She has noticed the side-glances from Luinarys and it makes her a bit insecure. It was impossible to go on and she just wanted to find out if her companion takes offence at her frank talk. Her glance wanders through the hall and gets caught at this young man again. Even in the shadow she could see that he was very handsome but it seems that he was also pretty young.
Who is that? I can’t remind of him, so he must be here because of this feast. If I’m going to see him later again? He looks pretty good. Tina winced Oops what thoughts. I should not think of any other man.
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Let us hurry, dear. We are late! Let us talk about this subject later - in private, please!
Thank God Luinarys whisper disturbs her mind and she nodded You’re right, we’re more than late. I take you at your word, let’s meet later And she takes her gowns skirt to be able to walk faster, when Luinarys stumbles. Tina reached out her hand to hold her Are you hurt? when the young knight already reached them. quote:
My lady! Can I help you? Are you harmed?
Sometimes I wonder where these knights were hidden as long as I wasn’t married. He looks even more handsome Again Tina feels like an observer. The young man helps Luinarys and glanced at her as if he knows her but he doesn’t know wherefrom. Immediately he steps back as he recognized her. Tina tries to hide her smile. Thank God he hasn’t had the possibility to drop her. It’s the same again and again. As long as they don’t remember her they act so normal and at the moment they know who stands in front of them there are walls, built faster than anything else. Sometimes I’m glad I’m not married with such a famous man.
She watches them talking and again she noticed side-glances.
If it’s going on like this I’m getting mad and paranoid soon. Is there anything on my face, he also glances at me. That makes me very nervous. What’s going in on in this castle? It’s going to be a madhouse with all these hidden and mysterious things, messages and meetings. Oh my God please take me out of here.
Her glance darkens and she frowns. Luinarys search for her eye contact with knitted brows. She also doesn’t know what’s going on and this strange talking makes her insecure.
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I'd like to talk to you without your handmaiden, please.
At the very first moment she didn’t know what to do. Burst out in laughter or in tears but she noticed a crawl in her stomach and the corners of her mouth turns up, just Luinarys shocked face keeps her from laughing and to be honest she enjoyed the facial expression of the young Captain after her friend cleared him up. Before she could tell him what crosses her mind another member of the Royal Guard appeared.
There must be a nest around here somewhere … she murmurs, watching the excited face of the second guard who called for Jorah whereupon the two men left.
No apology? He left without a single word because of his mistake. What the hell does he mean whom he is.
Was this smile pitifully or does it means that he was ashamed of his confusion. And then he leaves without a single word?
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Tina, I am so ashamed, dear. I don't know, where he left his manners!
I cannot imagine, that he doesn't know WHO you are! I mean, Tristanir is a knight of the Round Table – and Jorah is a member of the Royal Guard – both military groups must work together, mustn't they?
Please don't worry, dear!
What do you think? Does he rue his words? I mean it’s clear that he can’t know me, even if you think it’s different…but there haven’t been much possibilities he could see Tristanirs wife. Tina gives Luinarys a smile So I don’t blame him for that but I’m annoyed because he acted as if it’s the most normal thing to call me a handmaiden. No excuse after he heard who I am. He acted as if it’s and as if I’m the most unimportant person ever. Tina was pretty annoyed about that fact and her proud was a little hurt too. Her cheeks were reddened and her eyes sparkle. Should you pity me for being married with Tristanir what does this last smile means? I guess I should show him how the wind blows. If I’m right we’ll meet him later. But now my dear friend, hurry. We’re going to get big troubles With these words she takes Luinarys hand, the other hand takes her skirt and they head towards the hall after the “Lords House”. And he’s still not to be sneezed at.
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