Owl
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Future Life
Future Life
Oh those dreams return to haunt me through the day
And those dreams return to taunt me through the day
Oh, the pleasures that they bring
The realizations that they bring
The knowing in your heart, they're only dreams
Oh, the pain that's locked inside
Cause these dreams you just cant hide
When these dreams return to haunt you through the day
They are dreams of future life
But mixed in past, to bring me striff
And the knowing they're just dreams
And have to go
For, if I am to survive
If, I'm to live this life of mine
Then those dreams must be a thing
That lives in sleep
So I must come to realize, that my dreams be but my own
And my future life can come from only me
And dreams can take it all away you see.
For my future life can come
From only me.
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10/19/2005, 3:16 am
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Re: Future Life
Yours are fine. They are yours, not mine. They are your style of writing, your thoughts and feeling.
In ten years you'll in at another place in life. You will think and feel differently then today and your writings will change to reflect that. Your writing will change often during your life as you change.
Every change is simply you. You cant change that. You cant be who you arent. I see nothing wrong with your work. They are you at this moment in time.
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10/23/2005, 5:54 pm
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