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Cutie T
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Its been a long time,

Since i last saw you,

Since you held me close,

Like you used to,

No call, no letter, or anything at all,

But the thign that hurts most of all,

Is that you are not here,

And i need you to be,

That i need to feel you arms around me,

It hurts so much,

I hope you can see,

It hurt so badly,

Cuz you are too busy for me.

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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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*sigh* i know who this is for and i can feel the pain in your words i know you are hurting and your poem shows that so much it was a good poem it told a short story and it holds on to a moment in time anyway good poem trav i love you
           ~kitty

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I take photographs to hold onto time
I write to capture the feelings of each momment before it dies
I am me for the choices I make each and everyday
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Trav, I too.. KNow who it's for.. Your poems, captivate people by memories and things.. THis is not an exception.. Wonderful poem.. Sad thoughts..

*Nessa*
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Cutie T
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**** him being to busy for me.. he jsut fcking left me.. with out a ****ing word either.. so **** him

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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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Wonderful poem,sad feelings but wonderful poem.

Erika

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Good-bye cruel world
I'm leaving you today
Good-bye Good-bye Good-bye
Good-bye all you people
There's nothing you can say to make me change my mind
Good-bye.
Pink Floyd& also Korn-Another Brick in the Wall
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