MarkL15
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For someone who loves me, when i never thought he would.
How
how do you tell him what he means to you,
when you know that he wont feel the same,
how do you entrust all your secrets with him,
when you know you have nothing to gain,
how do you let him in close enough,
when he could cause you so much pain,
how do you accept that he will not be yours,
when your heart always knows his name
how do you push him away from you,
when you hang on each word that he says,
how do you pretend to love someone else,
when you don't love him this same way,
how do you love him with all your heart,
when you know he would just walk away.
how can you say that the feelings are none,
when his touch sings to your entire soul,
how do you pretend he is just a friend,
when without him your not really whole.
Last edited by MarkL15, 10/3/2003, 10:46 pm
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And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am
Goo Goo Dolls - iris
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10/3/2003, 2:00 pm
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Cutie T
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Good poem Mark... very nice... it sounds sad though jsut alil bit, but the poem its self was nice i really like this part: "how can you say that the feelings are none,
when his touch sings to your entire soul,
how do you pretend he is just a friend,
when without him your not really whole."
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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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Beautiful words. Words of longing, of hope, of despair, of insecurity, of love. I think love brings all these feelings and fears into play. We are at our most vulnerable when we love. To open ourselves to another, to expose that much of ourselves is the most wonderful and the most terrifying feeling imaginable.
These lines:
how do you let him in close enough,
when he could cause you so much pain,
Say all that needs to be said about that moment of fear and doubt.
It is SO hard to take that "leap of faith" and risk that pain. Sometimes--most of the time--you get the pain. But sometimes--and this is worth the risk of all that pain--you get the love.
How could anyone not love you?
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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"
from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam as translated by Edward Fitzgerald
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Cutie T
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Yes i really do agree with Luc.. HOW can ANY1 not love you Mark.. but good poem.. i keep rereading it lol... but its very good
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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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