MarkL15
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What I see
What I see
Take a walk with me and I will show you a wondrous sight,
I will show you a man so beautiful that words cannot describe,
but if you give me your patience, I will give you my time,
I will try to explain to you about this man and what I see inside,
a man whose heart and mind is open, to let people into his life
a friendship to him is a special thing that is never put aside,
if you love him he will love you back with intensity to strong to exist,
he would have everyone happy and at times that is one of his gifts,
though he is not always joyous, at times he is not always kind,
he has made mistakes and lived a life full of painful and dark times,
he wears those scars with his head held high, shows them for all to see,
the darkness at times consumes him, but the light is always set free,
his emotions are ever changing into bright colours all around,
let me show you those colours, in him they can mostly be found,
he holds the bluest blue within those eyes when his heart is filled with joy,
the bitter shade of green that flashes when he is angered or annoyed,
his words will wrap around you like the warmth of the bright yellow sun,
the purple bruises faded to scars, his emotions that stir with each one,
an ocean of deepest green and blue surrounds him when a storm is within,
amongst all these colours, there are the two that you cannot help but see in him
black faded into grey, darkest moments forever etched like a stone carving on his soul,
but surrounding him is a light of purest white, that makes him shine and makes him whole,
the light is strong like his love, but at time the darkness descends and burns out the light,
but his heart will always re open, the storm will always pass, the darkness will fade away
and the light that has faded will shine out the black, and for a time the light will stay,
so here I end this journey, no words will ever be enough but I have shown you all I can,
this is what I see when I look at you, my heart is in the hands of an amazingly wonderful man
For Luc
Last edited by MarkL15, 10/21/2003, 1:51 pm
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And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am
Goo Goo Dolls - iris
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10/21/2003, 1:48 pm
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Re: What I see
God, I love you! Sorry, you are only going to get a purely emotional response to this one. No analysis, no critique.
My favorite line:
black faded into grey, darkest moments forever etched like a stone carving on his soul,
Your words are as beautiful as you. *smiles* Reminded me what I was supposed to do after work today that I couldn't remember: Pick up more Kleenex!
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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"
Omar Khayyam
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Beautiful is about all i can manage to say.. this was very good Mark.. very very good... very few things take my breath Mark and this poem has taken my breath away very nice
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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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Yea its good but Mark can do better even i know he can!
 Cutiepie04, your posts are becoming anoying and perilously close to spam. I am the Great and Powerful OZ around here... don't piss me off or your posts may get carried off by Flying Monkeys (yeah... I'm also the Wicked Witch of the West from time to time--depending upon my mood). - wanderingsoul
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Get a grip of yourself Dude.
the kid loves yu.
Pretty amazing little dude.
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PERFECT...yeah that's Luc in a nut-shell bravo you are VERY..no no...EXTREMELY TALENTED
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Welcome to my hell
my field of bloody roses
always bound to be a thorn
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Ok it happened you made me throw up everywhere. I thought Luke wrote sickening poetry. This just makes me ill with despair, how can i be best frineds with someone who writes like this. Also what makes it worse, I am certain that is how you see Luke exactly. Why don't you crawl up his arse and name him your king. I am going now to gouge out my eyes and intoxicate my brain so i forget ever reading this. Mark I am dissapointed in you.
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