MarkL15
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Unwanted
Unwanted
never been the one that people want,
undeserving of receiving any love,
those few who love, they soon leave,
when you become unneeded,
then you are no longer wanted,
and you can smile a smile,
or cry a thousand tears,
but there is nothing you can do,
when they are no longer near,
the distance becomes a crevice in you heart,
no amount of building will make it work,
and your kept around out of pity not love,
you know that for them you will never be enough,
you become unwanted like a broken toy,
who is kept around not loved but not destroyed,
so you become someone who holds to that faded love,
not seeing your unneeded unwanted, not enough.
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And I don't want the world to see me
'Cause I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken
I just want you to know who I am
Goo Goo Dolls - iris
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1/9/2004, 12:08 am
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Cutie T
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Re: Unwanted
Brilant poem Mark.. it was very well written and i liked to read it ... though the feelings behind it were deep and i felt them very powerfully.. I went though a similar timne Mark weni felt unwanted and unneeded(refer to my poem unwanted nadn unneeded for reference) but Mark I cannot speak for any1 but me so i will speak for myself here and lets every1 else speak for themselves... I do not keep as a friend of mine out of pity or becuz i fell obligated too i kepp you as frind becuz i love you and i feel very honored to be your friend.. and you are deserving of Love you are deserving of love more so than alot of ppl i have known.. you are a go dpersonm Mark wheather you choose to see it or not becuz you have touched my life in many way san di amm deeply gratfull to know you Mark .. and i hope you never forget that i love you and i will always try to be ther for you.. NEVER let any1 tell you that i don't ove you and that i keep you out of pity beuz it would be a lie and neverlet any1 mke youthink that you don't deserfevg love becuz you do.. you are not a broken toy either in no way shape or form.. at least not to me you are like a brand new toy to be taken care of and to be well kept(yes i do know how that sounds but not in that context i think you all know what i ment by that lol )so Mark all i can say right now is that you are wanted and needed ... you are a VERY important part of my life and i don't think my life would be the same with out you in it.. but i love you mark and i hope you never forget it
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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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1/9/2004, 3:39 pm
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