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wondering how i got here
nothings making sence
I feel my palms go sweaty
I feel my muscles tence.

I've backed into a corner
I feel like I'm boxed in
my heart can't fight this battle
it's only made of tin.

even tho i struggle
my mind just pulls me down
gasping for each breath i take
afraid that i might drown.

waiting to be resqued
my eyes filled with my tears
feeling so exposed
to all my taunted fears.

every day and every night
I listen to my crying
tho i wear a good disguise
inside i'm realy dieing.

....Makeing Sence?



...how morbid emoticon

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Very good emoticon. It was like the peoms you wrote when you use lolpop as your sn. They were all very good. You write great poems for your age. they are better than mine. Keep writing so we can read more of them.
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never trusted
or recognized
because she wore
a great desguise.

it hid her from
everyones view
invisable
to me and you.

till someone came
and saw her there
sitting all alone
quiet, in her chair.

he sat by her
and said hello
she was suprised,
with head hung low.

she blush a bit
as he took her hand
it's like a ship
had found it's land.

she took off her cape
and let down her hair
noticed by everyone
and caught by thier stare.

hiding no more
and brought back to life
the next second she vanished
right out of sight.


don't ask...it's a dream I had

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time is of the escence
seems to go by very fast
use it very wisely
make sure to make it last.

every second is a lifetime
spent trough many years
all throught times of sadness
and through happy tears.

remember every memory
every time you were afriad
every happy thought you had
every relationship you've made.

don't forget a lifetime
one that once was yours
every single memory opens
up new doors.

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Re: steefs poems...er...stephys poems....

You know I love your poems. You have a wonderful talent! Your second poem--the one that you said was from a dream--seems to be answering the first in a way. Seems like they come from the same place within you.

Your third poem is the one I like the best. You speak my thoughts--though with a bit more optimism than I am feeling these days. It is really amazing that we have such a grasp of the concept of time passing and the need to savor the moments when we are so young (yeah, dear... you are so young!). I did when I was your age--and wrote similar things (though not as well).

And... "PoeGirl"???? emoticon I should NEVER have told you about Poe Boy! emoticon

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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"

from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam as translated by Edward Fitzgerald
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MUAHAHAAHAHAH! I KNEW IT WAS YOU. *dances in a fit of laughter* i may b young but i aint a total idiot...I'm not blind...i see what people realy are...age is nothing. you should understand what i am saying Luc, we've spoken about this before emoticon

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Good poems Steef! Liked the second one best I think. <--not an often thing of course-- Keep writing!

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pulling myself under
into my mind i go
all of my inner demons
putting on a show.

controling me
driving me
urgeing me
to blow my top.

I pull mr hair
i start to cry
and wonder why
I just can't stop.

outside i may look happy
inside i'm wageing war
screaming at the mirror
until my throat is sore.

I plead
I cry
I repent
I lie

but still i remain
I just want it all to end
before i go insane.

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BRAVO! Even better Steef! I love this one! =^o^=

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what is hell to you
eyes wide open
flames you see?

or a dark place
with out light
without company?

is hell on earth?
over sky?
across land and sea?

or is hell a place
wedged in the depths
inside you and me?

where ever hell is
what ever hell is
it exists
as you can see.

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