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Both of your new editions are very good, as always. I really like the one that begins "pulling myself under." It is both well constructed and filled with meaning.

I hope you will be adding more (I know you will since poems seem to pour prolifically from your fingers (yeah... practicing my alliteration!).

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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"

from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam as translated by Edward Fitzgerald

7/30/2003, 3:50 am

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lol...wow luc, i cannot believe just how disturbingly refreshing your complements are..YES i will write more.

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7/30/2003, 4:24 am

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I listen to the music play all my wonder, fear drift off with the melody, and i am swept away in a mad rush as i hear
the piano play a haunting wonderous tune. It fills my ears as the notes rise and fall in this ryhthm, I feel like i'm falling through a mad swirl of refreshing relief, ungulfed by this art, This amazing sensation. I watch as his fingers play the keys as if enchanted, and suddenly i am compelled to dance, as i am swept through time by this classical sarenade, but....the music stops, even tho i want for it to go on forever...it stops and i am forced to be returned to reality. Nothing good last forever, that's my lesson to tell

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7/30/2003, 3:35 pm

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Stephy, you are scary sometimes. Your last piece ends with the entire thought of my poem "nothing good can last." And I agree with the way some music effects the senses. It is sometimes so easy to get lost in the emotion of it.

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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"

from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam as translated by Edward Fitzgerald

7/30/2003, 4:48 pm

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yes...when i wrote this i was feeling a rush of emotions

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7/30/2003, 4:50 pm

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all of this pressure
all this hate
it's to late to save me
it's just to late.

everything dies
everything i touch
I'm tired of hurting
it's just to much.

everyone leaves
everyone i cared for
they shut me out forever
and finally shut the door.

I dunno why i grab the knife
squeeze it tight
and then i stop.

my legs go weak
i start to cry
and to the floor it drops.

I beg
I plead
"TAKE MY LIFE"
let me bleed

take me instead of them
TAKE ME INSTEAD OF THEM
Why not me instead of them
take this life i lead.

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7/30/2003, 8:50 pm

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My Love, My Love.......

You believed in me, in every word i told you. Everything i did was ok, everything a wanted, Needed...you gave. You stood by me when i was alone, you held me when needed to be loved, you gave me your heart and soul, You Loved me.
You truely loved me, and every night i'd wonder, "why have i been blessed with him" you filled in any open wounds you filled every spot you cared, you loved...and it was your love that drove me on, gave me hope. And now it's my turn...finally my turn To love you....to Love you.

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8/1/2003, 4:45 pm

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everyday i think of you
everytime you talk to me
i know that we're just friends
but think of what more we could be.

i'm to scared to tell you
scared of the things that you might say
I can't help but feel the way i do
but i can't find the right words to make you stay.

I love you, i love you
please say you love me too
without you i am lost
I don't know what to do.

I love you, I love you..........

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8/5/2003, 7:30 pm

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