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PoeGirl
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Would you believe me if i said i loved you?
would you see that i could care
would you feel the way that i do
if i could care less?
if i left and didn't come back
if i disapeared infront of your eyes
in the middle of a crisis
and left you to clean the mess
would you forgive me if i came back?
if i said sorry and begged and begged
would you cut me any slack?
if i didn't understand
would you help me too?
if i got realy pissed and said i was through
would you believe me?
if i fell down
would you laugh
would you taunt and tease me?
or would you help me up and urge me on?
if i said i hated you
would you laugh and say i'm wrong?
Would you

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Welcome to my hell
my field of bloody roses
always bound to be a thorn
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Cutie T
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Dear sister of mine this one i like... very well worded and has alotof feeling in it i just wish i could think of who you wrote it for my guess is Mr.Fox or some1 else like that but oh well i am only you big bro i should not be knowing these things(so says you but) i lvoe ya sis emoticon emoticon

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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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