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7/28/2003, 9:59 pm

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This is a new one I wrote it has some bad words in it.

Get on the floor
You ****ing whore
I am not going to
Take it any more
Its time you pay
For being this way
I pull out
The gun and you
Start to run
There is no way
You will get away
So you might as well stay
Its time
For you to die
Because you lied
I told you
many times
To quit that ****
But you would not quit
Now your crying because
You know your going to die
I hae told you for
The last time not to lie.
I point the gun to your head
As you begin to pray for your sins
I look into your eyes as i see
More fear than tears.

Its kinda long and crapy but I came up with it real easy.

7/28/2003, 10:07 pm

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You came to check my heart.
And you stole it from the start.
Your pretty eyes kept me from crying.
When the doctor said i was dying.

7/28/2003, 10:12 pm

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My sweet Raven

If you could quit
I would let you stay with me
Where you would be safe
From that crazy place
I would hate to see you die
Because it would make me cry
And thats no lie
I would miss your kisses
That are my wishes

7/28/2003, 10:19 pm

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You have a talent, TJ. I have told you that before. I REALLY like the one with the "bad words" in it! (Not sooo bad!) That one has such power. It is really an excellent poem!

I hope you post ALL of your poems here! I know you post them elsewhere, but I am selfish and greedy and want them on MY site! emoticon

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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"

from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam as translated by Edward Fitzgerald

7/28/2003, 10:21 pm

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Lucas ish that you?

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Welcome to my hell
my field of bloody roses
always bound to be a thorn

7/29/2003, 3:54 pm

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Great poems Tj!

9/23/2003, 5:46 pm

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