Sirus1
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marks wanna be poems
ok here goes nothing
all the pain i feel is it real
i taken it in without a thought
just like the things i loved
all fly out the widow
my dreams,my love, my hope
are what keep me alive
as the days go bye
i watch as they leave my side
without a thought
i know i should jump out after them
but i stay were i am
just watching as they fly out of my life
funny things come with my life
i try to end it all to find something wroth
living for
but then things change
i am to be gone within the year
but with hope and dreams
with a little help i stay
i know i will go on
to many people care for me
I CARE FOR ALL OF THEM
so i will I MUST MAKE IT
i will
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Re: marks wanna be poems
Pretty Good 
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8/8/2003, 11:25 am
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Re: marks wanna be poems
This is Pretty good mark... I like I like
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Your not my god,
your not my friend,
your not the ones that i will walk with in the end,
Your not the truth,
your a temporary shot,
and you Ruin peoples' lives and you don't give a second thought
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8/11/2003, 8:46 pm
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Sirus1
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I know you feel like the world is crashing in around you,
you feel like everything bad is happing to you,
but just remember that you have my love,
as little or as much as you want ,
I'm here to give it to you ,
so always remember I will always love you.
I will try hard to fight away the bad thing,
take some away from you and give it to myself,
just to make you day a little better,
so no matter what just remember I love you,
ok did you get the message I LOVE YOU,
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"There is no spoon."
"You take the blue pill you wake up in your bed, and believe what every you want to belive, but if you take the red pill i show you how far down the rabbit hole goes"
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Hey yoy have real talent i like your poems and i can tell they mean something personal to you, they have a nice flow and are easy to read can't wait for more 
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I love it when guys express their feelings. We are so conditioned NOT to in our society. You are really growing as a poet, Mark. Poetry can be such a lifeboat sometimes. You can just pour your feelings into it and it helps keep your head above water. I hope you will post more of your work here.
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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"
from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam as translated by Edward Fitzgerald
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ok i have a min so im writing...cool aint I
how many time must i forgive you
why do i let you slid
i know you love me
but why do you lie to me
i always try and be there for you when you need me
but its hard when i never know where you are
i know you will never be there for me
but i take what you give
and i am happy you give
even if it is a little
how much more can i take
there are limits on how much crap someone can take
i know the end is comeing
but i hide my face from it
i love you
you love me
what else do i need
nothing
all i need is the love you give me
even if it just a hi in the morning
or a hug when i am down
thats all i need from you
just your love
Last edited by Sirus1, 9/9/2003, 9:09 pm
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"There is no spoon."
"You take the blue pill you wake up in your bed, and believe what every you want to belive, but if you take the red pill i show you how far down the rabbit hole goes"
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Thats a great poem mark!Sorry for the crap I did to ya even though it won't change your mind about me!
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ok wrote this today at school, early in the moring. but i DID spell check, happy luc anyways here it is
CRASHING
The world starts to fall.
You’re forced to carry it on your shoulders.
As each minute passes you wish for death.
Waiting for the crashing weight to eliminate you.
Pound you down till your nothing but dust.
You look around at your friends walking past you.
Making up lies to make you look small.
Not knowing that is killing you.
Deep inside of you what little heart you have dies.
All the love you had for anyone is gone.
You move yourself away from them.
Your family starts to wonder.
You lie to them putting on a smile.
Hiding your self in your room.
Seeing how much blood you can get on the floor.
Feeling the pain rush threw you.
Numbing the reality of the ****y life you have.
Wishing more for the pain than the reality.
The pain makes you forget about the life you have.
You try and reenter the life you once had.
Then is hits you that the life you had sucked.
The friends you have never truly were.
The people you loved never loved you back
As you sit back and reflect
You feel the weight of the world fall back on your shoulders.
You continue on the path you have made for yourself.
Trying to prove that you are strong.
And even alone you can beat the odds and die a happy person.
Written by Mark Batson on 10-1-03 8:15 am
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"There is no spoon."
"You take the blue pill you wake up in your bed, and believe what every you want to belive, but if you take the red pill i show you how far down the rabbit hole goes"
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Its such a great poem i had no idea you felt that way!Oh um also did you ever get your stitches out?Just wandering cause yes i still care about your stitches and you!Great poems!
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