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My Real Poems.. please read!
Okay these are my real poems. They are deep and they mean alot to me. Most of them have symbolisim in them-
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i got this idea when i was staring out the window in class and watching a squirrel. these are my true thoughts. and this poem displays symbolism in the squirrel.
The Price of a Simple Life:
I am sitting here in this dry classroom.
Voices around me stay out of my hearing.
I look out the window and watch a black squirrel run up and down a tree.
I am trapped in a world I cannot seek.
The squirrel is innocent, careless, without worries.
A life without final exams, lying, cheating, cruelty, and harmful words.
The squirrel will never know the horrid human life and ways.
It only has problems of crossing the street unharmed, or gathering food.
What I would give to have the easy life of a squirrel: As I watch a car zoom by on the road where the rodent was crossing, smashed, bloody, in pieces.
I turn back to the teachers lecture. Another small, simple life, has passed in front of my eyes. My admiration of the rodents simple life pays no price but of death.
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Please give me some help on these poems.
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~Always~ Jenna~
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Pain:
Pain is something we cannot see. It is only felt. Pain is one of the inner secrets we wish to seek. Describe pain and soon you will find, it cannot be done. why is it we dislike pain? i ask myself this question as my deprived heart throbs. Pain is yet a good thing yet a bad thing. Pain is strong and immortal. Take my pain away.
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My Fantasy-
I sit in class, walk in halls, stare off into space,
all thinking and hoping for one thing. When I met you nothing else mattered.
Time is short, we just met,
I know you, and you know me.
I can not ask for anything more.
I compare you to everything I am doing
and wish the biggest tragedies on myself
just so we can be together.
I will go out of my way anytime for you, even for just a mere glimpse.
Only in my dreams would you be there.
But now it is clear you are here
and I want you to stay.
You have your ways of getting to me.
Laughing, smiling, talking, walking, falling, spilling,
and even when you act ‘retarded.‘
They all make me so attracted to you.
Every breath, every word that flows out of your mouth, regardless, is a song that makes my heart flutter to every beat.
Like a butterfly trapped that cannot get out; and my stomach in knots.
I stare into your amazing eyes hoping you will comply.
Your eyes send me the desire
of even just the simplest kiss,
but of something more a passion.
I can imagine our lips together,
as we lean in and then get the amazing smooth feeling of each custom line in our lips against the other;
the taste of it all residing in a sweet kiss.
Never ever have I had this happen to me;
never more will I meet anyone as amazing as you.
Let me crawl into your arms.
When will I wake up to the dreaded reality?
Deep Passion.
My fantasy-
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~Always~ Jenna~
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-Lifeless-
It invades your every thought, dream and hope.
You begin to regret everything said and done.
But one thing is always clear, true love never fails.
You love her so much you let her go. This strong pain is killing you both.
You let her slip by as fast as she came.
Who is to blame?
You let her cry as she wants to die.
The sparkles of joy in her eyes will no longer exist no longer will a sweet kiss.
Her eyes turned cold and depressed, her lips battered from biting the skin.
You let her spirit die so she sits in the corner and pretends to smile but she really cries inside.
She gave out her heart and soul to you.
She makes calls to get it back but they do not obey.
There they lay with you forever as she hopes you squeeze them with your fist.
The only thing she enjoyed, only thing she ever loved in life was you.
You made her feel special, loved, and strong, and then stripped and tore it all away. Congratulations, you got your way, but now she is lifeless, cold and bitter, in pain.
She cannot reopen, trust, or love; she cannot relive nor regain, anyone else, never again.
For you still and always will have her love.
She awaits for you inside with her dead spirit and pride.
You should love nothing about her, like everyone else.
I am she, that unworthy being of whom seeks your approval.
I shall lay here forever and wait until I die. -
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~Always~ Jenna~
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-Fighting the Wind-
She stands alone on a mountain,
The pitiless wind ruffles her hair and dries her tear-stricken face.
She’s on her own, fighting to remain strong.
The wind is powerful but she holds on for nothing but you.
Love is very painful and as brutal and cruel it may be, also lays a very beautiful and graceful thing.
She must have him!
She climbed up the very top and fought the wind.
Love shall conquer all. -
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Lying on the floor, cradling my wounds, wounds of not being next to you. A bitter crime, cruel and merciless. I want you to be near oh so badly. I cannot sleep, I cannot breathe,
I cannot feel nor think. For inside I already am when you are not there to wake up my soul. Only you can send me that passion. My longing for you cannot be measured.
You are my dearest. I lay dying without you, rotting in pain all around.
Wherever and whenever you are now come to me, let me seek you and have my deep wish. Come to me or I shall no longer be. You are so brutal in your ways of not always being with me. I need you always and forever. Do not kill me, please, for then I can never be with you again. Do not let me die by myself. I love you- Never leave me again for a second. Come back!
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Paper Heart-
My heart is made of paper, nothing but the thinness of it all. It used to be thick like a stuffed animal but you ripped out the stuffing and left it bare. You wormed yourself in so it would explode although you never quite succeeded. You never cared if it was to tear or did you want it torn in the first place? Hearts are made to pump blood and breathe. But you taught it to seethe. The paper gets flimsy every day and deteriorates with every say.
I should make my heart to be glass but glass cannot be ripped away. For every heart beat is like a drum of glee for death. Any day now my heart will be possessed and I will no longer be. I ponder if there is blood in my heart, maybe just ink and black globs of mortal pleas. My heart is made of paper no thanks to cruelty of mankind. You shall write on it and sign it as ‘You Shall Die.’
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I love you so much, enough to let you touch.
You got under my skin, i'll never let you leave.
I'll give it all to you, what are you giving to me?
One glance of your face and i forget every trace.
I walk the other way, the way that leads to you.
In my heart i know you don't go out of your way as i do for you.
In my heart i know you don't love me as much as i love you.
In my heart i know you don't pass anyone up for me as you do for her.
Even while having the knowledge of these things i still give you my all, everything i have to give.
I know it's wrong to give you play, you tell me it's wrong too.
But what can i do, It's all too natural, I can't not touch you.
It is hard for me to go about knowing you don't make sacrifices for me, would you if i was dead?
As i dream of this a smile comes to my face.
Then soon after it's replaced with a frown, I could never put him through that pain.
For that would be no good, for even though he gives me pain, I love him and i never could.
You never come to my locker to wait for me, i see you at theirs all the time.
I walk to yours often to find you, even if you have no time.
You always spend time the other friends of yours.
I feel cast aside.
I drop all my plans for you, and you blow me off.
If only you weren't so perfect, if only I could hate you.
But I can never hate you, your my everything.
But I hate myself, and yet all I ever need now, and forever more is you.
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~Always~ Jenna~
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This pain inside is just too strong, I can't admit how this is wrong, I can't move on.
Every second the pain grows deeper, and every time my strength gets weaker. I can't even think of you with someone else, I can't even think of kissing another. My heart mind and soul scream in agony whilst you rest with your best. I miss hearing your heartbeat from your chest, and the way you hold me like I am something of worth. All I do is curl up in a little ball on the ground for I am so tired and worn out. All I needed was you by the end of the day for I just wish you would stay. I wish you were here right now, to take my breath away since you always know how.
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