Laurie1981
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Lost soul
Ok so i'm gonna give this a go so sorry for my rubbish grammer. I'm going to be posting it in short parts or i will not post it all.
hee hee i sound like a right stroppy cow LOL i meant i'm not posting great long chapters like i tend to it will be short chapters 
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Re: Lost soul
Sexual content There will be sexual content later on.
Slash highly possible and likely knowing me
Language again more than likely knowing me
Violence yep its me right?
OK i will give this a rating of Rated as it will get worse once we get into it but the first parts are pretty much ok.
Chapter one
She ran faster than she ever thought possible, she felt her heart beat quicken as adrenaline took over. "Keep running one foot in front of the other keep going, don't stop" The mantra ran through her head. She jumped to avoid falling on the fallen tree stump, branches marked her face but they were the least of her problems, she had to keep going.
She would not fall she knew this, her agility would prevent that from happening, but her tired muscles screamed for her to slow, to rest. Rest would not be hers yet, she had to keep going. She felt a shift in the ground level, she was close, yes she could hear the water. Not far now twelve hours of running and she was nearly free, her steps slowed as she approached the edge of the ravine. The drop was great, a waterfall fell into the fast flowing river below, she knew there was every chance that she would not survive the dive.
She stood there on the raised ravine, wind whipped through her auburn locks and her green eyes shed a single tear. This is what she had been waiting for, her whole life, eighteen years had been leading to this day, her escape, her survival.
However looking at the drop she hesitated, she had a choice, she still had a choice, jump or be caught, but what fate would await her if captured?. She shuddered at the thought, unable to even allow herself to process that thought, her punishment would be worse than death.
As she looked back at the place she had known and the people she had met, she felt a great loss as she realised, she would never see them again.
As the voices neared, the shouts grew louder and the dogs barked, she turned and dived into the icy water below, darkness consumed her before she hit the water.
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Re: Lost soul
 So long as we get to read your words--don't care if you post one word at a time!
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And by and by my Soul returned to me, And answered "I Myself amd Heav'n and Hell"
from The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam as translated by Edward Fitzgerald
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